Above is a screenshot of a comment someone has made on my video. The reason i didn't pace the editing with the track was because i wanted it to feel more abstract and "handmade".Here is some more audiece feedback after i posted the video on the social networking site, Twitter. @jasminejang's point is fair, the repetition in my video is a bit tedious. Because of my lack of footage this is the case, as i had to repeat one or two shots, however i cut them up to make it look different. I don't think this is a huge issue and i wont be changing my video as this would involve me re-shooting which would take too long.